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I might continue working on this, I'm really happy with this as I think I've made a huge leap in progress for the first time in ages. (But it feels a little 'I'm nearly there' if you know what I mean)

Iron man is awesome!

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I think this is looking good man
the colours are great, all though i feel the lighting and shading arnt right. To me the shadows need to be darker and graduate more. And is the high lighting was more ambitions, if you get me, so rather then it been blended in should be more solid looking, try looking are photos of metals (metallic metal) for a refrance. Also ied loose the white aura kind of distracts from the main image.

The little white partials coming from his chest plate is a nice touch, would be nice to see some kind of liquid fire effect inside it though :P

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I can't write a critique because I ain't a member...boo hoo.
Anyway, yeah, a lot better than your previous paintings, only thing I can think of right now is that the armor needs to look more....metallic/shiney/smooth. Though I'm not entirely sure how you could accomplish this.
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Mm, yeah, this is definitely one of your more polished works you've ever accomplished. The highlights bring out some interesting aspects on Iron Man's suit, and the textures are also a really nice touch going on. Not to mention the blue gleam emitting from the visor--now that's cool. :)

Keep it up Vert dude. :highfive:

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very good. iron man looks awesome for show bro.

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Iron Man, so awesome!

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