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Poetry contest nightmares by `vertMB:iconvertMB:



Only at night time,
When I go to sleep,
All the things in the dark,
Start to creep,

It's only in my head,
It would seem,
Only imagination,
When I dream,

But look at the door,
It's starting to flood,
What's this red stuff?
Oh, it's blood,

What will I do?
I can't swim,
I'm being dragged down,
It's got a limb,

I can't escape,
I can't even breathe,
I wish I wasn't here,
I want to leave,

Wait it stops,
All is calm,
I'll check myself,
There is no harm,

So I carry on,
For the night,
And maybe....,
I won't recieve another fright.
©2006-2009 `vertMB
:iconvertmb:

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This poem was made for poetry contest, I'm playing to win a subscription for
Yep a poetry contest, how's that for irony. ;)

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:iconpsychokiller-lady:
really cool, i like your rhyming scheme, and your choice of words

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where do i fit into this world?
who will hold my hand?
insercurity and self-loathing is all i hold
...im invisible...
:iconfelousefarnayne:
the poem looks really cool and the rymhe is pretty nice too nice work and keep it up Vert

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Well an author's job is never done till next time readers
:iconmr-darlington:
I h8 nightmares...not that i dream much anyways, :lol:

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:iconamanitagemini:
Dude you got a big grin outta me! Havin a sense of humor is SO damn vital from my view -
And the rhythm of it is good.

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I represent a group called the Outlands Community USA. We live with our fears diminishing every day in the unobstructed universe. Ask me about it!
:iconvertmb:
Thanks, I'm not a natural poet, but when a contest comes I know it. ^^

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:iconamanitagemini:
Dude, always good to see your Devs.

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